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WalkthroughThe pull request updates the Servers.com installation documentation for Cozystack, focusing on enhancing the clarity and comprehensiveness of the installation instructions. The changes provide more detailed guidance for network configuration, OS setup, disk management, and Talos configuration. The document now includes more explicit steps, warnings about data erasure, and clearer instructions for network interface setup, SSH key management, and configuration template generation. Changes
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content/en/docs/talos/installation/servers_com.md (2)
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133-223: Fix YAML configuration syntax and indentationThere are several syntax and formatting issues in the YAML configuration:
- Missing colon after
networkfield- Inconsistent indentation under
machine.network.interfacesApply these corrections to the YAML configuration:
machine: type: controlplane kubelet: extraConfig: maxPods: 512 nodeIP: validSubnets: - 192.168.100.0/24 - network + network: interfaces: - deviceSelector: busPath: "0000:02:00.1" addresses: - 1.2.3.4/29 routes: - network: 0.0.0.0/0 gateway: 1.2.3.3
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82-96: Enhance disk setup safety measuresWhile there is a warning about data erasure, consider these improvements for safety:
- Add a confirmation step before executing destructive commands
- Make the warning more prominent
- Add a backup recommendation
Consider updating the instructions:
-⚠️ The following commands will erase your data! +⚠️ WARNING: DATA LOSS RISK! ⚠️ +Before proceeding: +1. Ensure you have backed up any important data +2. Verify you're working on the correct server +3. Double-check the disk selections + +The following commands will PERMANENTLY ERASE ALL DATA on the selected disks! + +To proceed, type the following confirmation: +```bash +read -p "I understand this will erase all data. Type 'YES' to continue: " confirm +[ "$confirm" = "YES" ] || { echo "Aborted"; exit 1; } +``` Wipe disks
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content/en/docs/talos/installation/servers_com.md (2)
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97-112: Enhance network interface identification instructionsThe current instructions for identifying network interfaces could be clearer. Consider adding:
- A template for recording interface information
- Example output of the
ip acommand- Clear steps for matching MAC addresses
Add a structured format for recording interface information:
### Interface Information Template Record the following for each interface: ```bash Interface Name: _______________ MAC Address: _________________ Alias (altname): _____________ Type (public/private): ________Example
ip aoutput:2: eth0: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP,LOWER_UP> mtu 1500 link/ether 00:11:22:33:44:55 brd ff:ff:ff:ff:ff:ff altname enp1s0 inet 192.168.1.100/24 brd 192.168.1.255 scope global eth0--- Line range hint `225-234`: **Add validation steps for Talos configuration** Consider adding validation steps after each configuration phase to help users verify their progress: Add these verification steps: ```markdown ### Validation Steps 1. After interface configuration: ```bash # Verify interface configuration ip addr show ip route show
After applying node configuration:
# Verify Talos configuration talm healthAfter bootstrap:
# Verify cluster status kubectl get nodes -o wide kubectl get pods -A</blockquote></details> </blockquote></details> <details> <summary>📜 Review details</summary> **Configuration used: CodeRabbit UI** **Review profile: CHILL** **Plan: Pro** <details> <summary>📥 Commits</summary> Reviewing files that changed from the base of the PR and between 0156c1c5b6b64b001fbd3308e996c04ba777f4e9 and cff673e48128953266a4318f58caaf891e054996. </details> <details> <summary>📒 Files selected for processing (1)</summary> * `content/en/docs/talos/installation/servers_com.md` (1 hunks) </details> <details> <summary>🔇 Additional comments (1)</summary> <details> <summary>content/en/docs/talos/installation/servers_com.md (1)</summary> `224-224`: **Verify the YAML image link and path** The image link `/img/yaml_img.png` should be verified to ensure it exists in the correct location and displays properly. <details> <summary>✅ Verification successful</summary> **Image path exists but needs adjustment** The image exists at `static/img/yaml_img.png`, but the current link `/img/yaml_img.png` doesn't include the `static` prefix. However, this is actually correct because in most static site generators (like Hugo), the `static` directory is the root for serving static assets, so files under `static/img` are served directly from `/img`. </details> <details> <summary>🏁 Scripts executed</summary> The following scripts were executed for the analysis: Script: ```shell #!/bin/bash # Check if the image exists in the repository fd -t f "yaml_img.png"Length of output: 46
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