Fixed feedback to summary and motivation

MIPs/mip-x.md

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 ## Summary
-This proposal aims to add a new JSON-RPC method, `wallet_revokePermissions`, to MetaMask. This method is designed to offer a high degree of flexibility in managing permissions. This streamlines the user experience by reducing the number of steps needed to manage permissions and disconnect from dApps, thereby aligning with traditional OAuth systems for enhanced user control and privacy.
+This proposal aims to add a new JSON-RPC method, `wallet_revokePermissions`, to MetaMask as a counterpart to `wallet_requestPermissions`. This method is designed to offer a high degree of flexibility in managing permissions. This streamlines the user experience by reducing the number of steps needed to manage permissions and disconnect from dApps, thereby aligning with traditional OAuth systems for enhanced user control and privacy.
 
 ## Motivation
 The MetaMask Wallet API currently lacks a streamlined way for users and dApps to revoke permissions. This proposal aims to:
 
-1. Streamline User Experience: Currently, disconnecting a dApp requires navigating through multiple UI layers. Implementing `wallet_revokePermissions` will simplify this process and align with user expectations.
+1. Streamline User Experience: Currently, disconnecting a dApp requires navigating through multiple UI layers. Implementing `wallet_revokePermissions` will simplify this process and align with user expectations. Also enabling users to have granular control over their permissions directly from within the dApp not only enhances UX but also aligns with best practices in data privacy and user agency.
 
 2. Close an Ergonomic Gap: Being able to request permissions but not revoke them programmatically is inconsistent and poses challenges for developers. This proposal offers a holistic solution for permission management.
 
 3. Developer Experience: dApp developers currently might resort to mocking disconnect functionality, which is not a genuine revocation of permissions. `wallet_revokePermissions` allows for an authentic disconnect, enhancing security and user trust.
 
-4. User Experience: Enabling users to have granular control over their permissions directly from within the dApp not only enhances UX but also aligns with best practices in data privacy and user agency.
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 By implementing wallet_revokePermissions, we achieve feature parity with traditional permission systems, offering a more robust, secure, and user-friendly environment.